麻烦看一下有没有语法错误?It‘s the second time for me to be here to attend the spoken English contest.Last year,I got the first prize.My family embroider the picture on the clothes for a living.Myparents are not only bosses but also the
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麻烦看一下有没有语法错误?
It‘s the second time for me to be here to attend the spoken English contest.Last year,I got the first prize.
My family embroider the picture on the clothes for a living.Myparents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines.Sometimes I help them move the clothes.
文法上你写的句子并没有甚麼错,但句子结构则有修饰的须要,为了尊重你的原文,我照原意顺序替你更正如下:
It‘s the second time (for me to be here to attend改为 that I took part in) the spoken English contest.Last year,I got(可以考虑改为 won) the first prize.
My (family embroider 改为 family's business is embroidering) (去掉 the) picture(s) on (去掉the) clothes(去掉 for a living).My parents are not only bosses but also the workers;Look,they are working with embroidery machines (要加 now).Sometimes I help them (要加 to) move the clothes
更正後的版本:
It‘s the second time that I took part in the spoken English contest.Last year,I won the first prize.
My family's business is embroidering pictures on clothes.My parents are not only bosses but also the workers; Look,they are working with embroidery machines now.Sometimes I help them to move the clothes
很乐意能够帮到你,希望会对你有助.
they are working with the embroidery machines。
注意上下文要连贯,句子和句子之间加一些承接副词。
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修改后参考如下:
It's my second time to take part in the English Speech Contest. I won its first prize last year.
My parents have their own business, embroidering pictures on clothes. Th...
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你好!
修改后参考如下:
It's my second time to take part in the English Speech Contest. I won its first prize last year.
My parents have their own business, embroidering pictures on clothes. They employ themselves and work with embroidery machines. This is a picture taken when they were working. Sometimes when I'm free, I help them move the clothes.
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