英语作文语法问题(打括号应该改为什么,谢谢啦!)Staying away from electronic devicesSome students spend much time on electronic devices, such as playing computer games, watching films and so on. I think Eric Schmidt’s advice is
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英语作文语法问题(打括号应该改为什么,谢谢啦!)
Staying away from electronic devices
Some students spend much time on electronic devices, such as playing computer games, watching films and so on. I think Eric Schmidt’s advice is very useful.( I agree his advice. )In my opinion, having more time to talkface-to-face with their friends and parents( are all )very important. Of course, playing computers games can also relax ourselves.(So everything is moderate.)
I agree with him is So everything should be moderate
with 加个 all 去掉
双引号,和句号
我觉得:
第一个地方最好是去掉,agree后边接的介词太多,也太复杂,有的时候用法没错,但是老师也会觉得别扭。如果硬要加,那就变成agree to。
第二个地方,主语是跟父母和朋友谈谈这件事儿,所以应该是单数形式,用is。
第三个地方我也不知道了,就是觉得moderate这么用起来很别扭。...
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我觉得:
第一个地方最好是去掉,agree后边接的介词太多,也太复杂,有的时候用法没错,但是老师也会觉得别扭。如果硬要加,那就变成agree to。
第二个地方,主语是跟父母和朋友谈谈这件事儿,所以应该是单数形式,用is。
第三个地方我也不知道了,就是觉得moderate这么用起来很别扭。
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