雅思小作文there was an upward trend in proportion of old people over the period from 1992 to 1996,with its peaked at 5% in 1996.这句话语法上都有那些错误

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雅思小作文
there was an upward trend in proportion of old people over the period from 1992 to 1996,with its peaked at 5% in 1996.这句话语法上都有那些错误

从语法上来看,peaked用错了,不应用分词的形式,直接用peak名词即可.整个句子从语义来看,句子写得有点累赘.

peak在这里是峰值的意思,所以直接用名词就行。