请大家帮忙修改下我的英语作文Suan and Jane started things early.Suan started learning English when she was 8 years old .She went to her first movie when she was 4 years old .It was a comedy.And at the age of 1 year old Suan first had a p

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请大家帮忙修改下我的英语作文
Suan and Jane started things early.Suan started learning English when she was 8 years old .She went to her first movie when she was 4 years old .It was a comedy.And at the age of 1 year old Suan first had a party.It was a birthday party .And Jane,she is clever.At the age of 7 years old learned to ride a bicyle .She started playing a sport when she was 5 years old .

Susan and Jane started learing things early.Susan started learning English when she was 8 years old and saw the film for the first time when she was 4 years old.It was very interesting.And at the age of 1 year old Susan first had a party,which was a birthday party.As for Jane,she is a clever girl,who learned to ride bicycle at the age of 7 years old and she began to paly sport when she was 5 years old

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