看看我写的句子有没有错误?Huangshan Mountain,located in the south of Anhui province,covers an area of 1,200 square kilometers,is famous for tones and cloud.covers 还是 covering

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看看我写的句子有没有错误?
Huangshan Mountain,located in the south of Anhui province,covers an area of 1,200 square kilometers,is famous for tones and cloud.
covers 还是 covering

没错
covers

Huang Mountain is located in the south of Anhui province which is covered with an area of 1,200 square kilometers and it is famous for its tones and clouds.
你的句子不连贯~!都是一个个短语

Province要大写

对啊 你的句子都是断开的短语 加上合适的关系代词或关系副词变成从句不是更好嘛?
词组:be covered with

covering,现在分词修饰主语黄山。句子结构不错,但最好这样:
Huangshan Mountain,located in the south of Anhui province,is famous for tones and cloud.It covers an area of 1,200 square kilometers.用两个句子来表示显得好一些啊