学帮网帮我看一下,英语作文的语法点有木有错,Famil Dinner On New Year's EveI have a big family .On new year,there is a big family dinner.My favorite two dish is "the west lake vinegar fish" and "sweet and sour pork ribs",but I don't eat them.
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帮我看一下,英语作文的语法点有木有错,
Famil Dinner On New Year's Eve
I have a big family .On new year,there is a big family dinner.My favorite two dish is "the west lake vinegar fish" and "sweet and sour pork ribs",but I don't eat them.I don't want to be fat .My father's favorite dish is "Salt and pepper shrimp",but I don't think it healthy.My mother's favorite dish is "sand pot of fish head tofu",it is yummy.
1.Famil应该是Family吧.
2.I don't want to be fat .我不想成为胖?应该是I don't want to 【get】 fat.我不想变胖.
3..My favorite two dish 【is 应该是【are】吧.
4.but I don't think it healthy应该是 but I don't think it 【is】healthy
5.正文中On new year应该是【On New Year's Eve 】
这个时态如果是过去式的话
have-had is-was don‘t-didn’t
我觉得现在这个时态应该也可以.
1、Famil 改为Family 2、.On new year改为On New Year's Eve 3、dish is改为dishes are 4. I don't eat them改为I didn't eat them 5、there is a big family 改为there was a big family 6. healthy改为被good to health。
家庭年夜饭
我有一个大家庭。在新的一年里，有一个大的家庭晚餐。我最喜欢的两道菜是“西湖醋鱼”和“糖醋排骨”，但是我不吃。我不想发胖。我爸爸最喜欢的菜是“盐和胡椒虾”，但我不认为它健康。我的母亲最喜欢的菜是“鱼头豆腐”砂壶，它是美味的。
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家庭年夜饭
我有一个大家庭。在新的一年里，有一个大的家庭晚餐。我最喜欢的两道菜是“西湖醋鱼”和“糖醋排骨”，但是我不吃。我不想发胖。我爸爸最喜欢的菜是“盐和胡椒虾”，但我不认为它健康。我的母亲最喜欢的菜是“鱼头豆腐”砂壶，它是美味的。
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