学帮网请帮忙指出：错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议.Everyone has their own fear,and I also have.I used to be afraid to go swimming,because when I was young,I used to fall over the pond,then I drank a belly of water,and then I was af
来源：学生作业学帮网 编辑：学帮网 时间：2024/06/11 07:18:45
请帮忙指出：错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议.
Everyone has their own fear,and I also have.I used to be afraid to go swimming,because when I was young,I used to fall over the pond,then I drank a belly of water,and then I was afraid to swim.But just last year,things have changed in my friend's help,I overcame the difficulties,sincethen,I am no longer afraid of swimming.
不是错误的语法重点句型。
But just last year,things have changed in my friend's help ,改成things changed with the help of my friend.很硬写的东西,多背点英文文章吧
Everyone has his own fear, and I am not an exception. I used to be afraid of swimming because when I was young, I fell into the pond and drank a belly of water,sinc. then I was afraid of swimming. But last year,things changed with my friend's help, I overcame the fear and am no longer afraid of swimming.