急!求助帮忙看英语短文英语值日文章,帮忙看下有没有语法错误,顺便加点句子Tom is a little boy, and he is only seven years old. Once he goes to a cinema. It is the first time for him to do that. He buys a ticket and goes in
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急!求助帮忙看英语短文
英语值日文章,帮忙看下有没有语法错误,顺便加点句子
Tom is a little boy, and he is only seven years old. Once he goes to a cinema. It is the first time for him to do that. He buys a ticket and goes in. But after two or three minutes he comes out, and buys the second ticket and goes in again. After a few minutes he comes out again and buys the third ticket. Two or three minutes after that he comes out and asks for another ticket. But a girl asks him,“Why do you buy so many tickets? How many friends do you meet?” “No, I have no friends here,but a big woman always stops me at the door and cuts up my
ticket.”
语法错误貌似有的.文章“Once”这边后面应该用过去时态.还有这边很多and、but关联词用法不太对.可以用短句,减少用这些关联词啦
希望可以帮到你.
急!求助帮忙看英语短文英语值日文章,帮忙看下有没有语法错误,顺便加点句子Tom is a little boy, and he is only seven years old. Once he goes to a cinema. It is the first time for him to do that. He buys a ticket and goes in
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