我写了一篇英语作文,On My Way to SchoolLast Monday,I got up very early.After I finished my breakfast,I went to school.On my way to school,I saw a purse lying on the ground.I picked it up and found there were much money in it.I had no time to

我写了一篇英语作文,
On My Way to School
Last Monday,I got up very early.After I finished my breakfast,I went to school.On my way to school,I saw a purse lying on the ground.I picked it up and found there were much money in it.I had no time to wait for the own.So I handed this purse to the policeman and ran to school as quickly as possible.When I was having a class,the headmaster went to my class and praised me.I thought the policeman told to the headmaster on my way to school.At last,I felt happy because I had done a good work.

On My Way to School
Last Monday,I got up very early.After finishing my breakfast,I went to school.On the way,I saw a purse lying on the ground.I picked it up and found there were much money in it.I had no time to wait for the owner,so I handed it to a policeman and ran to school as quickly as possible.When I was having a class,the headmaster went in and praised me.I thought the policeman had told him what i did on my way to school.At last,I felt extremly happy because I had done a good thing to others.
小盆友~你果真是在写"我在马路上捡到一分钱"的故事唉 哈哈.整体水平不错 只是有个别的搭配错误 语言 也可以再简练一些~

I picked it up and found there( were )(改为was..)much money in it. I had no time to wait for the own(改为owner ,主人).the headmaster went to（into） my class and praised me.I thought the policeman told to the headmaster(加上what i did) on my way to school.At last,

五花八门的高考加分
一年一度的大学高考录取开始，“高考加分”再度引起国人的瞩目。“高考加分”乱象百出，五花八门，并且愈演愈烈、势不可挡。
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五花八门的高考加分
一年一度的大学高考录取开始，“高考加分”再度引起国人的瞩目。“高考加分”乱象百出，五花八门，并且愈演愈烈、势不可挡。
现在中国各地高考加分可谓眼花缭乱：三好学生加分，优秀学生干部加分，青少年科技创新大赛获奖加分，华侨子女加分，港澳台同胞子女加分，少数民族学生加分，二级运动员加分，博士生子女加分，见义勇为者子女加分，烈士子女加分，优秀专家子女加分。
“明天小小科学家”活动获奖加分，中小学电脑制作获奖加分，国际科学与工程大奖赛获奖加分，国际环境科研项目奥林匹克竞赛获奖加分······
这些加分项目大致可归为两类：一类是鼓励性加分，另一类是照顾性加分，其中仅国家教育部公布的高考加分政策就有十多个条目，涉及数十个类别。同时，各地区的高考招生委员会还有权制定本地区的政策性高考加分政策。
据研究高考加分政策多年的一位专家说，近几年来，许多行业或部门纷纷通过关系找教育部门要求出台加分政策，加分项目越来越多。 这位专家统计，如今各地高考加分项目涉及体育、外事、计划生育、公安、民政、工会、民族事务委员会、残疾人联合会、科学技术协会等十多个部门和单位。
这样就出现了这样的问题：所谓的“高考加分”，“加”的是什么分？是通过考试得来的分数吗？是合法的分数吗？就凭教育主管部门的一纸规定？这纸规定有何法理依据？
了解中国高考情况的人都知道，高考当中，每一分都是宝贵的，“一分之差”会跨越成千上万的人。而高考加分一“加”就是十分、二十分。可以想象，将会有多少学生和家庭因此而改变了命运！这就使得一些家长想方设法为子女弄来各种名目的加分资格。
中国各地不断出现高考加分造假的丑闻：高考考生“二级运动员”资格造假，华侨子女资格造假，三好学生和优秀学生荣誉造假等等。那些没有办法获得加分资格的考生和家长感到极其的不公平，以致连续发出疾呼：要“裸考”！不要加分！
可以说，“高考加分”颠覆了受教育者在入学、升学等方面依法享有平等权利的法定原则。缺乏严肃性，没有公平性和公正性，自然就会出现“丑闻四起、乱象百出”的现象。“高考加分”何去何从？不知谁能解开这道难题。
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Last Monday, I got up very early. After I finished my breakfast, I went to school. On my way to school, I saw a wallet lying on the ground. I picked it up and found there were some money in it. I had ...

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Last Monday, I got up very early. After I finished my breakfast, I went to school. On my way to school, I saw a wallet lying on the ground. I picked it up and found there were some money in it. I had no time to wait for the owner, so I handed the wallet to the policeman and ran to the school as quickly as possible. Later, the headmaster came into my classroom and praised me in front of my teacher and classmates while we were having a class. I figured the policeman must have told the headmaster what happened.I felt happy and proud because I did the right thing.
purse多指女士手袋，提包。wallet才是钱包。我想你大概想说的是钱包吧。

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