英语翻译为公司翻译了一份brief,请大家帮我看看里面存在的语法错误以及翻译不妥的地方 Kunshan Longtengqixin Mold&Injection Co.,Ltd is a specialized private enterprises in the mould design and finished plastic products

英语翻译
为公司翻译了一份brief,请大家帮我看看里面存在的语法错误以及翻译不妥的地方
Kunshan Longtengqixin Mold&Injection Co.,Ltd is a specialized private enterprises in the mould design and finished plastic products manufacturing of precision auto-part and medical instrumentation.Company are located in the famous historical and culture citiy of Qiandeng in Jiangsu province.We based on the faith of the good faith foothold,the innovation sends far and keep absorbing & referring to the world advance design principles and managing methods since the founding of the company in 2004,we also keep introducing high quality manufacturing equipment and owned highly qualified manager,professional development team and skilled technicians personnel.Company adopts the Standardization Management System,following TS16949:2002 quality system,willingly to direction is market demand,emphasis is technology development and fundamental is clients' demand.We endeavours to provide high quality service,high accuracy products and high efficiency solution to the clients.
The company machining workshops covers an area of 2000 square meter,owned various of importation of equipment 30,providing the full set of mold&product solutions.Since establishing,We insist on “ good faith,highly effective,unity” objective,Keep good teamwork relationship with other customer.In the past we had received the customer of Germany and Japan high acclaim after exporting of the mold and products.So we sincerity hope that we will provide more opportunities for pleasant business relations between enterprises from home and abroad.We promised customer that we will provide the first-class quality,advanced technology,high effective and reasonable price to you with first-class service!
按照你们的意思我做了一下修改并把中文一同上传，请大家帮忙再看看还有没有其他的问题：

第1行,Enterprises的最后一个s多余
第3行,Company应改为复数形式,Culture改为Cultural
第4行,province首字母大写
第5行,Keep后加S,Advance后加d,design后加ing
第7行,Owned去d
第12行,Meter后加s
第14行,establishing改为establishment,其后的句型改为objective of...(此处最好用goal）
第15行,Teamwork改为cooperate,customer后加s
第16行,sincerity改为sincerely
第18行,will改为would
第19行,Effective改作effect
PS：要注意句型的统一时态,注意单词的单复数,注意词性

请发中文，似乎错误蛮多

同意二楼
第一行 同意
第二行 designed改为designes
第三行 改为Our company is located in Qiandeng in Jiangsu province. which is a famous historical and culture citiy, 这样比较妥当
第四行 We based 改为 We base
第七行 ...

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同意二楼
第一行 同意
第二行 designed改为designes
第三行 改为Our company is located in Qiandeng in Jiangsu province. which is a famous historical and culture citiy, 这样比较妥当
第四行 We based 改为 We base
第七行 同意
第八行 去掉 personnel
第十一行 endeavours 去掉s
第十三行 整句动词时态太有问题了
第十八行 改为We have promised that we would provide...
第十六第十九同意
有些只是感觉不是很正确

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昆山Longtengqixin模具注塑有限公司是一家专门的民营企业在模具设计和成品塑料制品制造精确的自动部分和医疗仪器。公司位于著名的历史和文化citiy的千灯在江苏省。我们的信念基础上的真诚立足点，创新和不断发出远吸收＆指的是世界进步的设计原则和管理方法，成立以来，该公司于2004年，我们还不断引进高品质的生产设备和高素质的国有经理，专业的开发团队和专业技术人员。公司采用标准化管理系统，下面的T...

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昆山Longtengqixin模具注塑有限公司是一家专门的民营企业在模具设计和成品塑料制品制造精确的自动部分和医疗仪器。公司位于著名的历史和文化citiy的千灯在江苏省。我们的信念基础上的真诚立足点，创新和不断发出远吸收＆指的是世界进步的设计原则和管理方法，成立以来，该公司于2004年，我们还不断引进高品质的生产设备和高素质的国有经理，专业的开发团队和专业技术人员。公司采用标准化管理系统，下面的TS16949 ： 2002质量管理体系，心甘情愿地为方向的市场需求，重点是技术开发和根本的是客户的需求。我们努力提供优质的服务，精度高的产品和高效率地解决客户。
该公司加工车间占地面积2000平方米，拥有各种进口设备30 ，提供了一套完整的模具和产品的解决方案。自创办以来，我们坚持“诚信，高效，统一”的目标，保持良好的团队与其他客户。在过去，我们已经收到了客户的德国和日本的高度评价后，出口的模具和产品。因此，我们真诚希望，我们将提供更多的机会愉快的业务关系的企业之间国内外。我们承诺客户，我们将提供一流的质量，先进的技术，高效和合理的价格为您提供一流的服务！

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你修改了之后，还是有不少地方翻译得不当，我帮你重新整理了句型，你再看看这样是不是会比较通顺：
KunShan Longtengqixin Mold&Injection Co., Ltd, a specialized private enterprise, is dedicated to developing and manufacturing mould and finished plas...

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你修改了之后，还是有不少地方翻译得不当，我帮你重新整理了句型，你再看看这样是不是会比较通顺：
KunShan Longtengqixin Mold&Injection Co., Ltd, a specialized private enterprise, is dedicated to developing and manufacturing mould and finished plastic products of presision auto-part and medical instrumentation. Founded in 2004, our company is located at the famouse historical and cultural city of QianDeng, Jiang Su province. Holding the faith that "honesty and innovation make better business", we have been keeping introducing high quality manufacturing equipment to establish scientific production process. Longtengqixin is incorporated by a group of highly qualified management, professional R&D team and skilled technicians. With the guide of the Standardization Management system and fully complying to TS16949:2002 Quality System, the company has three principles that "Market Demand shall be the guide, R&D shall be the core and Customer's Needs shall be the key" and strives to provide customers with high quality service, high accuracy products and high efficiency solutions.
Longtengqixin is equipped with a 2000 square-meter workshop and over 30 imported equipment of various kinds, and is capable to provide customers with total solutions from mold to product. With the tenets of "Good Faith, Highly Effective, Unity", we have been maintaining good relationships with our customers all over the world since the company's inception. Our mold and products are mainly exported to Germany and Japan, and are well acknowledged among the customers. We sincerely hope to set up business partnerships with more companies around the globe, and we promise to offer the top tier quality, advanced technology, high efficiency, reasonable price as well as the first-class service.

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Longtengqixin Mold&Injection(昆山)有限公司是一家专业的私营企业在模具设计和完成塑料制品制造精密auto-part和医疗器械。公司位于著名的历史和文化citiy江苏省的Qiandeng。我们基于信仰的诚信立足创新,发送和保持吸收和参照世界先进的设计原则和管理方法,自公司成立于2004年,我们也不断引进...

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还是看软件翻译后的内容吧，从这里可以看出哪些软件不认识了
Longtengqixin Mold&Injection(昆山)有限公司是一家专业的私营企业在模具设计和完成塑料制品制造精密auto-part和医疗器械。公司位于著名的历史和文化citiy江苏省的Qiandeng。我们基于信仰的诚信立足创新,发送和保持吸收和参照世界先进的设计原则和管理方法,自公司成立于2004年,我们也不断引进高品质的设备制造和拥有高素质的专业开发团队经理人员和熟练的技术人员。公司采用标准化管理体系,质量体系、TS16949:2002心甘情愿去的方向是市场需求,重点是技术的发展,基础是客户要求。我们致力于为客户提供高品质的服务、精度高的产品和高效率的解决方案。
本公司加工车间占地面积2000平方米,拥有各类进口设备,提供全套30 mold&product的解决方案。自成立以来,始终坚持“诚信、高效、团结”的宗旨,保持良好的合作关系,与其他用户。在过去,我们已经收到客户的高度赞誉之后,德国和日本的模具和产品的出口。所以,我们真诚的希望我们能有更多的机会发展相互间的友好合作关系国内外企业。我们承诺我们将提供客户优质的产品、技术先进、高效、合理的价格和一流的服务,给你!

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