麻烦帮我看下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错?My name is Cathy.I’m thirteen years old .I learned from Chang Yi primary school .In the primary school ,I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .I’m a clever girl .I like to read books and

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麻烦帮我看下这篇英语自我介绍有没有错?
My name is Cathy.I’m thirteen years old .I learned from Chang Yi primary school .In the primary school ,I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .I’m a clever girl .I like to read books and sing songs .I like to study.Because it can give me much knowledge .This is me.
(有的话帮我改一下,

I learned from Chang Yi primary school .
语法是对的,但说起来有点别扭,建议改成：
I am study in the Chang Yi primary school.
I’m a good student in the teacher's eyes .
还是很别扭,不知道是不是译成了中式英语,建议改成：
All the teachers think I am a good student.
I like to read books and sing songs .建议改成：
My hobby is reading books and singing songs.
I like to study.建议改成：I like studying.

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