跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.my summer holidayToday,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup
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跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.
my summer holiday
Today,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup.I think what food is delicious.Because l like eating sweet.My parents think what people are good to them.I think so.Yuck!I'm not feeling well,i have a sore throut.I think i have a cold...
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my summer holiday
Today,(I'm going to) I arrived in (the) TONGXIANG(这个TONGXIANG是什么?地名?) .The city is(It's如果TONGXIANG是地名就这么改) beautiful,I like it.
Tt(Here) was(is) cold today,so I wore(l'm putting on)my coat (my clothes clothes- -你也不可能是裸奔去的啊).So,(After,)I did not feel cold today( i'm feeling warm).For lunch,I (i'm) had(eating )rice,fish,vegetables and soup.I think the(what 为啥用what?) food is delicious.(Because l like eating sweet.孩子.米饭
Today, I'm going to (为什么用进行时,可以用一般现代时,或过去时)the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful, i like it. Here is cold(这句表达有问题),so l'm putting (还是时态不对)on my clothes. After, i'm feeling warm(还是时态不对). For lunch, i'm eating ...
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Today, I'm going to (为什么用进行时,可以用一般现代时,或过去时)the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful, i like it. Here is cold(这句表达有问题),so l'm putting (还是时态不对)on my clothes. After, i'm feeling warm(还是时态不对). For lunch, i'm eating rice(还是时态不对),fish,vegetables and soup. I think what food is delicious(这句是想说什么?表达不对,可以用wonder). Becausel like eating sweet. My parents think what people are good to them.(这句表达也有问题,不知道你父母说的什么) I think so. Yuck! I'm not feeling well, i have a sore throut. I think i have a cold...
Help me! I don't want to see the d
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写以前的事,最好全用过去时
my summer holiday
Today, I went to TONGXIANG. It's beautiful, and i like it. It was cold here, so l wore my thick clothes. After that, i felt warm. For lunch, I had rice,fish,vegetables and soup...
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my summer holiday
Today, I went to TONGXIANG. It's beautiful, and i like it. It was cold here, so l wore my thick clothes. After that, i felt warm. For lunch, I had rice,fish,vegetables and soup. I was wondering what kind of food is delicious, because l like eating sweet foods. But my parents insist on what is good to people. I think so. Yuck! I'm not feeling well, i have a sore throat. I think i have a cold...
Help me! I don't want to see the d
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迟芳丽 改的不对 today要用现在进行时