帮忙看看错了哪儿There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with

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帮忙看看错了哪儿
There is Fuzhou ,It's in summer ,so very hot .But in the evening ,it's very cool .Lost of people are go out .They wear T-shirts or Beautiful skirts .Some young people are go shopping ,It's interesting .Some are talking with the others . And the old people like going for a walk in the park .They're relax .The children also play have great fun.
Every one have a good time.
英语高手帮忙改改,错了哪些地方.

(第三句)so it's very hot
(第六句)Lots of people go out
(第八句)Some young people go shopping
(第九句)Some talk with others (时态一致)
(第十二句)They're relaxed
(第十三句)The children also have a great fun