英语一句话求改错!Outside are big leaves,Inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.描写粽子的.总感觉句式结构怪怪的,请大神在原意不动的基础上帮忙改下谢谢!

英语一句话求改错!
Outside are big leaves,Inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
描写粽子的.总感觉句式结构怪怪的,请大神在原意不动的基础上帮忙改下谢谢!

Wrapped up with big leaves,it is fulfilled with rice,red dates or other things.首先英语里面故意把inside outside这种词放在句首形成倒装显得非常刻意,这是中国人的思维方式,其次英语一句话要有一个主谓结构,在一个主谓结构的基础上用分词、同位语、后置定语、状语等等非谓语成分在主句前,或主句后进行修饰,正如这一句,wrapped up with big leaves,这是过去分词作状语,是非谓语成分,后面的句子才是主句,有完整的主谓结构.另外,你这个句子的句法问题叫run-on sentence,属于中国学生经常出的问题,两个完整的句子不能用逗号隔开,要么用连接词,要么用句号和分号.

outside are lots of leaves and inside is rice with

没什么，口语这样表达的话也没有问题。书面的话，建议改一下，因为主语不全。改为
Outside it are big leaves,Inside it is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.即可

两个句子用逗号隔开并且没有连词, 这不符合英语语法规则. 故是错的.

建议修改如下:
Outside are big leaves while inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
外面是大叶子,而里面包的是米和肉、红枣或其它东西。
Outside are big leaves，...

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两个句子用逗号隔开并且没有连词, 这不符合英语语法规则. 故是错的.

建议修改如下:
Outside are big leaves while inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
外面是大叶子,而里面包的是米和肉、红枣或其它东西。
Outside are big leaves，and/but inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
注: outside, inside 位于句首,并没有错. 这是用的倒装句型. 主语分别为 big leaves 和 rice .

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两个句子用逗号隔开并且没有连词, 这不符合英语语法规则. 故是错的.

建议修改如下:
Outside are big leaves while inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
外面是大叶子,而里面包的是米和肉、红枣或其它东西。
Outside are big leaves，...

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两个句子用逗号隔开并且没有连词, 这不符合英语语法规则. 故是错的.

建议修改如下:
Outside are big leaves while inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
外面是大叶子,而里面包的是米和肉、红枣或其它东西。
Outside are big leaves，and/but inside is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.
注: outside, inside 位于句首,并没有错. 这是用的倒装句型. 主语分别为 big leaves 和 rice .
没什么，口语这样表达的话也没有问题。书面的话，建议改一下，因为主语不全。改为
Outside it are big leaves,Inside it is rice with meat ,red dates or other things.即可

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Big leaves are outside,and meat ,red dates or other things are inside.