Identifying Sentence Errors The store is offering books which are filled with coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purchase more than $100 worth of products.(1)How to correct it?(2)Why correct it like you do?(3)What it is meaning?Please tell me

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Identifying Sentence Errors
The store is offering books which are filled with coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purchase more than $100 worth of products.
(1)How to correct it?
(2)Why correct it like you do?
(3)What it is meaning?
Please tell me patently.Thanks

corrected sentence:
The store is offering "both" books which are filled with coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purchase more than $100 worth of products.
The sentence has no grammar mistakes,but there is a logical problem.
用中文说就是你的句子里,books which are filled with coupons and free T-shirts这句意思不清楚
可以理解为books里装满了coupons and free T-shirts
但是实际上是books which are filled with coupons 和 free T-shirts是独立的两种物品,用both的话就可以区别and前和and后的物品了

The store is offering books which are filled with coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purchase products worth of more than $100.
获得优惠券的人应该是购物满多少钱的人,那么强调的就是商品的价值,所以应该把商品和钱的顺序交换
整个句子的意思是:<...

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The store is offering books which are filled with coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purchase products worth of more than $100.
获得优惠券的人应该是购物满多少钱的人,那么强调的就是商品的价值,所以应该把商品和钱的顺序交换
整个句子的意思是:
这家店卖给那些购物超过100美元的购物者的书都附有优惠券和T恤。
不知道我说的对不对。

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The store is offering what are filled with books coupons and T-shirts to customers who purchase the worthy of products more than $100
商店提供免费T恤衫和购书代金卷为那些消费超过100美圆的消费者

The store will offer coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purchased more than $100 worth of books.
(if the store is selled books) or
the store will offer books coupons and free T-shirts to shoppers who purechased more than $100 worth of products.
is offering "正在派发",不好!