英语短文,求修改,润色Hello,everybody,I am glad to take part in the program. let me introduce myself first. my name is xxx.I am a active boy.There has 6 years since I arrived the world.I have many hobbies,such as playing piano,dancing,cartoon.

英语短文,求修改,润色
Hello,everybody,I am glad to take part in the program. let me introduce myself first. my name is xxx.I am a active boy.There has 6 years since I arrived the world.I have many hobbies,such as playing piano,dancing,cartoon.Of course,learn and speak English is one of them too.in order to improve the ability ofspoken language and increase my confidence,I come here.If get the award,I think it’s not important.Because participation is the most important.

Hello,everybody,I am glad to be here.
let me introduce myself first.
my name is xxx,an active adorable boy.
It has been 6 years since I came to this world.(你只有6岁~orz)
I have many hobbies,such as playing piano,dancing and sketching cartoons.
Of course,learning and speaking English is one of my hobbies,too.
in order to improve the proficiency of my speaking English and to build up my confidence,I came here.
Even if I can get the award,I will not take it important.
Because participation is the most important for me.

Hello，everybody，I am glad to take part in the program. let me introduce myself first. my name is xxx.I am (an) active boy.(It) has (been) 6 years since I (came to ) the world.I have many hobbies，such ...

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Hello，everybody，I am glad to take part in the program. let me introduce myself first. my name is xxx.I am (an) active boy.(It) has (been) 6 years since I (came to ) the world.I have many hobbies，such as playing piano,dancing,(and) cartoon.Of course,(learning) and (speaking) English is one of them too.(In) order to improve the ability of (my) spoken language and (strengthen) my confidence,I come here.(Whether) (I can) get the award (or not),I think it’s not important.Because participation is the most important.

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In this my prize if I do not think that participation in important.Because are the most important thing. Focus on enjoying the process.
Hello everyone, I am pleased to take part in the scheme. Let me introduce myself first. My first name is a positive xxx.I are boys. 6 years this has really improved. I have a lot of hobbies, such as play the piano, dance, cartoon.Of Of course, the learning and speaking English is one of them in order to enhance the capacity of too.in order ofspoken language and my confidence increased and better training and my verbal ability to negotiate.

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按你的要求改了改 ，希望你能用上 ，加油
Hello every body, it’s my honor to participate in this program.At first,let me introduce myself,an active boy to you. My name is ***.It has been six years since I arrived in ...

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按你的要求改了改 ，希望你能用上 ，加油
Hello every body, it’s my honor to participate in this program.At first,let me introduce myself,an active boy to you. My name is ***.It has been six years since I arrived in this world.My hobbies are in a wide range,such as playing piano ,dancing, ,cartoon and so on,I am extremely interested in learning and speaking English, of course. In order to inprove my oral English and the confidence someone should always have,I stand here,in the face of you all. Whether I win the award is out of my consideration.As a saying goes,participation is the most important.

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Hello，everybody，I am glad to take part in this program. First, Let me introduce myself. My name is xxx. I am an active boy.
It has been 6 years since I arrived in the world. I have many hobbies...

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Hello，everybody，I am glad to take part in this program. First, Let me introduce myself. My name is xxx. I am an active boy.
It has been 6 years since I arrived in the world. I have many hobbies，such as playing piano, dancing, watching cartoon. Of course, learning and speaking English is one of my hobbies too. I came here because I want to improve my English and build up my confidence.
To me, getting the award would not be the most imporatnt part of the experience, but rather, the participation would be the most rewarding.
下面是改写版本。有些句子在英文意义不明所以我改版了一些口语
Hello，everybody，I am glad to take part in this program. First, Let me introduce myself. My name is xxx.
I am an energetic boy. I am six years old. I have many hobbies，such as playing piano, dancing, and watching cartoon. Of course, learning and speaking English is one of my hobbies too. I came here because I want to improve my English and build up my confidence.
To me, getting the award would not be the most imporatnt part of the experience, but rather, the participation would be the most rewarding.

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