请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句等,Good morning,everybody!It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself .My English nane is Alice.I'm an out-going girl

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请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句等,
Good morning,everybody!It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself .My English nane is Alice.I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure .Ii's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.My favorite sport is swimming.It' very helpful to lose weight.When l'm tired,l like to piay the zither,this is a great way to relax .How is your way to relax yourself Can you tell me I hope that we can be friends.Thank you!

错误1、第一行的倒数第二个,应该是name.
2、When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure Ii's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.如果你是高中毕业了,应该是过去式,不过要把最后一句去掉.但你应该是刚上高中,所以不要用when,或者前面加个I think.还有,seinor school应该是senior high school
3、第二行最后,a little只能修饰比较级,可以改成harder或者换个词（如very,so）
4、My favorite sport is swimming 这一句中不能用swimming,直接用swim就可以了.
5、It' very helpful to lose weight 少了个s应该是It's
6、.How is your way to relax yourself 这一句中应该改成to relaxing,how应该改成what.

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Good morning,everybody! It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself . My English nane is Alice. I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure . It's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.My favorite sport is swimming.It's very helpful to lose weight.When l'm tired,l like to play the zither,this is a great way to relax .How is your way to relax yourself ? Can you tell me ? I hope that we can be friends. Thank you!
我只改了几个单词，你有错误，但不多，仔细看我改的文章吧！

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It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself. My English name is Alice. Although it's a little hard for me to study and i believe i can study well.

it's my.....my English name is....When I was in my seinor school I was under pressure.后面的It's的形式也是，还有play ，时态有些要用过去式

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