找以下文中的错误或建议.The software used for testing A was updated during your visit last time. Which software should we use now, the old one or the upgraded one? whether the computer needs to connect to the internet?if we should use the u

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The software used for testing A was updated during your visit last time. Which software should we use now, the old one or the upgraded one? whether the computer needs to connect to the internet?

  1. if we should use the upgraded one, please provide us the related test procedureand update method.

  2. If we should use the old one, there are some problems on both computers that the software was updated.

        2.1 one computer popped out an error message when we clicked the software’s icon,please see the attached EEROR.JPG for your reference.

        2.2 The other computer popped out an message said no flow during testing. Please See the attached file for your reference: NO FLOW.JGP.

     Could you advise how can we solve these problems?

3. When we perform the test on a computer that the software wasn’t updated, the test can be passed.        

中间缩后的三段有明显的错误(圆括号中是添加的词,段落后方括号中是关于错误的说明).
The software used for testing A was updated during your visit last time.Which software should we use now,the old one or the upgraded one?whether the computer needs to connect to the internet?
If we should use the upgraded one,please provide us the related test procedure and update method.
  If we should use the old one,there are some problems on both (of the) computers that the software was updated.【“两台电脑”指the old one 和 the upgraded one,应该用特指的both of the computers】
  2.1 one (of the) computers popped out an error message when we clicked the software’s icon,please see the attached EEROR.JPG for your reference.【同上,一台电脑指两台中的其中一台,也应该用 one of the computers特指】
  2.2 The other computerpopped out an message (which) said no flow during testing.Please See the attached file for your reference:NO FLOW.JGP.【The other computer popped out an message 是一个结构完整的主句,后面 said no flow …应该是定语从句,需要加上作主语的关系代词 which 或 that才能构成完整的句子】
Could you advise how can we solve these problems?
3.When we perform the test on a computer that the software wasn’t updated,the test can be passed.

 该软件用于测试一个更新上次访问期间。我们应该使用哪个软件现在,旧的或升级一个?电脑是否需要连接到网络吗?
  如果我们应该使用升级,请给我们提供相关的测试procedureand更新方法。  如果我们应该使用旧的,有一些问题在两个电脑,软件更新。  2.1一个电脑弹出一个错误消息,当我们点击软件图标,请参阅附上的EEROR。JPG,供您参考。  2.2其他电脑弹出一个消息说没有流测试期...

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 该软件用于测试一个更新上次访问期间。我们应该使用哪个软件现在,旧的或升级一个?电脑是否需要连接到网络吗?
  如果我们应该使用升级,请给我们提供相关的测试procedureand更新方法。  如果我们应该使用旧的,有一些问题在两个电脑,软件更新。  2.1一个电脑弹出一个错误消息,当我们点击软件图标,请参阅附上的EEROR。JPG,供您参考。  2.2其他电脑弹出一个消息说没有流测试期间。请查看附件,供你参考:不FLOW.JGP。  你能建议我们如何才能解决这些问题呢?
  3。当我们执行测试电脑,软件没有更新,测试可以被传递。

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