学帮网检查语法错误帮我看下有没有什么语法错误或不合适的地方,谢谢①Statement of research interest (briefly describe your interest and previous background in research)I am very interested in fundamental physics, especially in the
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检查语法错误
帮我看下有没有什么语法错误或不合适的地方,谢谢①Statement of research interest (briefly describe your interest and previous background in research)I am very interested in fundamental physics, especially in the theories which attempt to reconcile general relativity with the principles of quantum mechanics , like string theory. I’m now carrying out a research plan titled Study Condensed matter physics using the method of field in collaboration with a classmate.②Career and Education Plan (briefly describe your plan after graduation and what you hope to learn from the Summer Camp)In order to continue the pursuit of understanding physics, I’ll go to a college for my PhD and become a professional physics worker working on theorectical physics after my graduation. In this summer camp, I hope to learn how to think precisely as a physicist, what each reaearcher thinks about the foundations of physics ,and how they study physics, etc.
你是研究 广义相对论和量子理论的学霸啊,佩服!
提几个个人建议吧：
1 英国人习惯说carry out a research ,而不是carry out a research plan
2 论文名称的每一个单词首字母都要大写
3 英国人习惯说 by the method of .,不是using the method of ...
4 英国人习惯说For doing ...,而不是in order to do...
5 physics worker 的说法让人费解,为什么不直接用physicist ,在英语语境下,专业搞物理研究的就是physicist,而不像中文语境,非要成名成家才能算物理学家.
6 what each reaearcher thinks about.看意思应该是用how,而不是what
7 think precisely 不好理解,你的意思是think exactly吧
PS：你英语基础不错,就是有点中式英语的问题.相信经过留学经历能讲的更地道.