英语作文:关于一篇邀请信,帮我看看有没有什么语法问题,Dear peter:I will hold a dinner party at my house on July 1st 2011 in order to get together before the graduation and leaving of each.As you are a close friend of us,we woul
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英语作文:关于一篇邀请信,帮我看看有没有什么语法问题,
Dear peter:
I will hold a dinner party at my house on July 1st 2011 in order to get together before the graduation and leaving of each.As you are a close friend of us,we would very much like you to anticipate in farewell and share the recollection.
the occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening,with the telling of every experience,and this will be followed by a dinner party.the arrangement will be abundant and various,in which there is the singing of mary ,witch would be accompanied by John.I look foward to pleasure of your company,and if you want to perform,I will arrange for you.
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Dear Peter
I will hold a dinner party at my house on July 1st 2011 to allow all of our friends enjoy a happy get-together before the graduation and leaving from each other.As you are our closed freind ,we would like to invite you to join us and share with us the good recollection.
The party will start at 7:00pm .Everybody will share his experiences to others ,and a dinner party will be followed with abundant and various arrangement including songs presented by Mary ,and perhaps accompanied by John .
I am looking forward to your kind reply ,and all of us will be delighted if you could make a performance.
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