As far as I am concerned,they can broaden my view and bring me creative thinking.哪里错了 怎么改

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As far as I am concerned,they can broaden my view and bring me creative thinking.
哪里错了 怎么改

broaden horizons或outlook拓宽视野比较地道,view是观点,视线的意思.bring用得也有中式英语之嫌,最好用teach.
还有提醒那些不会的不要不懂装懂误人子弟,As far as I am concerned明明是很常见的用法,怎么可能错,一定上课没好好听.

they can broad my view

我觉得应该去掉am