英语翻译The last time I received a gift is a ukulele,that's a gift my girlfriend give me for my birthday,I like music very much,so I was very excited.这句语法哪里有错误请指正,另外在口语里very much very excited这种词能不能

英语翻译
The last time I received a gift is a ukulele,that's a gift my girlfriend give me for my birthday,I like music very much,so I was very excited.
这句语法哪里有错误请指正,另外在口语里very much very excited这种词能不能换个高级点的.这么说感觉是小学生说的话

The last gift I received is a ukulele. That's a birthday gift from my girlfriend. I'm fond of music, so I felt thrilled.