谁帮我挑挑语法错误的地方!A:Hello!B:Hello!How are you?A:Oh!Today is not my day .I'm very gloomy.B:Why What happend A:I forgot bring the key of my home once .B:Un...And than?A:I decide call my roomate .B:That's a good idea A:But nobody answ

谁帮我挑挑语法错误的地方!
A:Hello!
B:Hello!How are you?
A:Oh!Today is not my day .I'm very gloomy.
B:Why What happend
A:I forgot bring the key of my home once .
B:Un...And than?
A:I decide call my roomate .
B:That's a good idea
A:But nobody answer ...
B:Oh No...
A:So I must wait for my roomeate .
B:When did she come back
A:An hour later.My home's door opened .Because she is sleeping at home...
B:Ha ha ...

A:Hello!
B:Hello!How are you?
A:Oh!Today is not my day .I'm very gloomy.
B:Why What happend
A:I forgot bring the key of my home once .（forgot bringing)(once去掉）
B:Un...And than?（than改成then)
A:I decide call my roomate .（decide to)
B:That's a good idea !
A:But nobody answer ...(answered)
B:Oh !No...
A:So I must wait for my roomeate .(had to)
B:When did she come back
A:An hour later.My home's door opened .Because she is sleeping at home...(is 改成 was)
B:Ha ha ...

写的很乱、语法根本不对、这样的文章日本人是根本看不懂的。。。最主要的没有用敬语。我根据你的意思给你重新写一下吧。 XXX先生 こんにちは お忙し

happend -happened
bring - to bring
once- again
than-then
decide call -decided to call
answer-answered
is sleeping-was sleeping

forgot+bringing
once 去掉
And then?
Decide+d to call
home's door was opened
she was sleeping

1forgot bringing,因为这是已经发生了的事情
2un can be changed with uh
3decide to call
4answers
5when will she
6house's door is opened.
7key to my house

happend-happened（过去式-ed）
forgot bring-forgot bringing(表示忘记过去做过某事)
key of-key to（……的钥匙用key to sth）
once?用在这里有什么用？如果表示一次，就放在句首
than-then
decide call-decided to call（decide to do sth过...

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happend-happened（过去式-ed）
forgot bring-forgot bringing(表示忘记过去做过某事)
key of-key to（……的钥匙用key to sth）
once?用在这里有什么用？如果表示一次，就放在句首
than-then
decide call-decided to call（decide to do sth过去式动词-ed）
answer-answered（过去式-ed这是很基本的）
must-had to（must表示主观愿意做某事，have to表示客观必须做某事）
is-was（过去进行时，结构：主语+was\were+动词-ing+其他。表示过去某段时间正在做某事）
二楼有些没改到key 和decided

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A: Hello!
B: Hello! How are you?
A: Oh! Today is not my day . I'm very gloomy.
B: Why ? What happend ? （happend为happened）
A: I forgot bring the key of my home onc...

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A: Hello!
B: Hello! How are you?
A: Oh! Today is not my day . I'm very gloomy.
B: Why ? What happend ? （happend为happened）
A: I forgot bring the key of my home once . （I forgot to bring my key of home again .frogot bringing是我带了钥匙，但忘了我把钥匙带上了的意思)
B: Un...And than? (Un...And then?)
A: I decide call my roomate .(I called my roomate .这是过去式)
B: That's a good idea !
A: But nobody answer ... (But nobody answered ...)
B: Oh ! No...
A: So I must wait for my roomeate .（must 为 have to）
B: When did she come back ?
A: An hour later. My home's door opened . Because she is sleeping at home... （My home's door一般用The door of my home)(is 为was）
B: Ha ha ...

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